A TENDER LOVE STORY - III

Author: bondgal_rulz / Labels: ,

“Nice car!”, Jennifer exclaimed. They were on their way to the airport and her first comment made Michael turn and look at her with a smile. All the while he was wondering as to whether he should break the ice, but he knew that a 15 minute journey wasn’t enough. His heart though was conveying other plans to his mind.

He suddenly realized that he hadn’t spoken a word since she’d got into his car and knew that she’d find it weird. She would soon start asking questions. He didn’t want that.

“Jennifer, mail me once you reach there, okay.”, he couldn’t believe that he had a tongue after all.
“I will Michael – and, you too,…..”, she said. She glanced at him and then looked out of the window.

Michael could feel a lump in his throat. “Oh God!”, he thought, “Why can’t you do something?? 5 more minutes and she’s gone from my world, my life…..”

The sudden screeching of tyres startled him. He saw that a limo ahead of his car had applied brakes and reacted instantly.

The traffic had suddenly come to a grinding halt. There was some commotion up front and he could sense the confusion sitting in his car. Other car and vehicle drivers were getting out of their automobiles. Horns blared as some people started getting impatient.

“What has happened Michael?”, Jennifer was concerned.
“I dunno.”, Michael said as he opened his seat belt and started to open the car door. “Jennifer just wait in the car, will you?”

He proceeded and paced towards a group of men who looked like truck drivers. He heard some sirens as cop vehicles rushed past them in another lane.

“Excuse me guys, can I know what is this confusion all about….?”, he asked one of them. An old man was quick to answer.

“Hey Junior, can’t go up – it looks like a truck broke its axle, reeled diagonally and now the 30 meter monster is lying across 3 lanes and it’ll take at least an hour to tow the thing away….so, we’re stuck here for worse.”

“Jesus Christ!!!”, Michael couldn’t believe it.
“…That’s a nice day, eh boy?”, the man laughed as he turned back to the gang.

Jennifer listened expressionless as Michael explained the whole situation to her. Michael could feel a candle of hope being lighted in his heart as he recounted that her getting to the airport in all this mess was almost practically impossible.

“I can’t reroute Jenny – it’s not possible. See you’ve got to understand this okay – the subway is 20 kilometers from the bypass to the airport – even if we make it through the traffic, it’s gonna take more than 15 minutes….Sorry Jenny….I’m really sorry but I can’t do anything about it…so…”

“We are not going to make it!!”, Jennifer interrupted him. She was still blank as ever.

“We are not going to make it….even if we take a hike. All right….I can understand…All right then….”, Jennifer said assertively as she reached out for her cell phone.

She proceeded to dial a number as Michael watched with bated breath.

“Hello….yeah…could you please cancel the ticket for Jennifer Mason Biggs scheduled….yeah…and reserve a ticket for tomorrow, same time…yeah…yeah…thank you.”

Jennifer looked at Michael standing absolutely motionless.

“What…..?”, she asked him.

Michael answered with a smile.

16 comments :

Arnab Majumdar said...

Many questions left unanswered, and although one part of me wants another chapter for this, the other wants the story to be over just like this...

P.S. I couldn't sleep finally. :P

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Arnab...Well that's understandable, as it is not quite finished yet.

Damn insomnia. ;)

Sruthisagar Yamunan said...

its not finished yet?


Wow! This is what I call an engaging story :)

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Twisted Elegance...Na-uh. ;)

Really ? Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. :)

Cheers.

Pallav said...

Ok u mean nw we have to wait for the next one...
Thatsssssss not ........

no no ,, everything is Fair, its up to u yarrr... u r writer u can do anythng
ha ha ha
i thought nw finally Michale will say instead of flying to other place, why dont u fly in my love...
he he he... just kidding..
Good one...
i liked it nw i hv to wait for nest one....

Kartz said...

Ok... ok... Going good..! :)

Peace.

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Pallav....Well think of it this way. I'm giving you practice with that thing called Life, cos it ain't not fair either. ;)

"Fly in my love" !! Lol :D

Glad that you like it. :)

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Kartz.

Thanks mate. :)

Pallav said...

Yes u rock Mam.....

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Pallave...eh, thanks ? :P

Karan said...

Ms. Isha... u need to consider writing professionally...

lookin at th way u write... wht u hv writtn here.. n in th Letter to Mr. Laden...

Its so gripping.. you certainly know how to hold th attention of ur readers.. and make them long fr more...!!

"losing sleep"..."not fair"... "engaging"... im nt th only one whoz thinkin this way... :)

PS - all of us like happy endings... :) ...

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Karan.....Thank you so so sooooooo much for all those generous words. They mean a lot to me. :)

And no one is losing sleep re. Arnab just couldn't sleep that night. My story is not guilty of that. :D

Cheers

Karan said...

dont just let all this praise frm ur readers go in vain.. use it.. channelize it to do wht i said.. write professionally.. at least giv it a try... fr magazines... books like Chicken Soups.. stuff like that...

Good Luck... :)

Bt first thngs frst... u bettr complete this story frst .. end th suspense...!!

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Karan....I'm honoured beyond words. I really am. But truly speaking I don't think I've what it takes to write a book, yet that is. ;)

And I have finished the story. :P Read it and lemme know what you think.

Cheers

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

What did he answered with smile???

Hmmmm next to answer i guess...is it? or left unswered..?

bondgal_rulz said...

@ Mahesh...he answered the question Jennifer asked and also the one which she did not ask but was evident in her voice, in her eyes.

Read the next part and you shall know for yourself...

Cheers

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