She wanted to be able to cry, when hurt. She wanted to be treated like a girl, if only by him. She wanted it to be known that she was as sensitive as a little child. That she too liked to sing and dance in the rain. She wanted to be like everyone else - normal.
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Is this SHE - by any chance YOU ??..
oh and btw..i m no 1...yippeee
Tell her it's ok to dance in the rain. Tell her it's also ok to slap him incase he's acting insensitive ;)
Lovely.. true to the hilt! If only wishes turned true..
Hey, can u explain the funda of 55 fiction....i cnt make much out of it?..is it 55 short stories...or something else!
Nice lines, btw :)
Love,
A
lovely!!! i felt lik i'm saying the lines.. lik someone who has always been treated as someone unbreakable. :)
great work!
lotsa luv,
Annie.
I second Dhanya.
Tell her to Pamper herself. Not by anychance, he is gonna bbe the last person on the planet. moreover, if he cant be hers, God will give her the best in His time.. =)
@ Amith - She is her and not me. :P
Yayieeee !!!! Better keep up the trend now ok? :P ;)
Cheers
@ Dhanya - Will do. Hope she understands. :)
He he, that tto I'll do for her. Lol.
Cheers
@ Netika - If only.....
@ Amit - 55 fiction is like any other form of fiction. Only it is a micro fiction which is limited to just 55 words. It has all the elements of a normal fiction though.
Hope that helped. :)
Thanks a ton. :)
Cheers
@ Annie - Really ??
Unbreakable....how true...
Thank you so much. :)
Cheers
Tats tthe prob with being no1 u see...every1s tryin to beat you to it..but rest assured i ll be fighting hard..lolz..;-)
one more question..y aint u asleep yet??/
@ Richa - Sure will. :)
I hope not !!! *Shudders at the thought*
Amen to that. :)
Cheers
@ Amith - Good!! *Pats on the back*
I'm what they call an insomniac buddy. :P
join the club !!...i m pretty much that myself...
and wut prevented her from all these?
@ Amith - I'm the FOUNDER of that club mate. So YOU are welcomed in the club. :P
@ Sawan - expectations.
achaaa..we ll know whos FOUNDER today..dekhte hain who sleeps first!!...open challenge issued!!..;-)
Not fair !!! I have college tomorrow and you have an off!! huh!!
Moreover, moi dead tired after helpin out my bro with his report. :|
Let's keep it for tomm and see who emerges the winner.
lolz!!! xcuses xcuses!!.aree yaar i have office tomm..i just cant sleep coz my arm hurts..lolz...
anyways xcuses xcuses..!!
Office on a Saturday ?? What gives ?? :P
And oieee...get well soon ya!! Take care k!
i have stuff to finish off at work tomm!!..kyaa kare!!...hmmpphh..
and awwwwww...u can be nicee eh!!
Ha ha....this is what happens when you surf porn at the time of work. :P :D Lol
I'm an accomplished actress. Period. :)
being normal is so relative isnt it??
cheer up girl!!
i dont surf porn at work!! i just have them on download..!! i m quite committed to my work remember even though i dont quite enjoy it..;-)
wow..u know..i actually think u r a female ME!!..just not as hot..hehe
@ Raka - Hmmm. That IS quite true actually.
Oh!! I'm all cheery cheery. :D
Cheers ;)
haha..in ur dreams dearie...naa its just ur sarcasm that i m talkin about..!
Sorry sweetheart but you are yet to make way into my dreams. :P
Really ?? Not too long ago someone siad that I needed classes on it...foot in mouth eh? :P
wow...for someone who doesnt have me in her dreams u sure remember everything i ve ever said..gotcha!!
Uh, heard of something called a SHARP memory ??? :P
Bet you wouldn't know what it is like to have one! :P
hey...arent u the person who forgot she was having some placement thingie?? if my memory serves me right, u slept right through it..
guess ur sharp memory is only applicable to things related to me ;-) ;-)
i like this game..hehe...
hey...
simple,short,sweet wishes...
nice one...
Pallav :D
@ Amith - Yeah ODD things have a tendency to stick out in my head. :P
The feelings are mutual mate. :P ;)
@ Pallav - Thank you so much. :)
Cheers
Ooooh...intense! Great one as usual!! :) :)
P.S.: OMYGAWD....you guys..Amith and Isha..you're like SO VELLA man!! But guess who's no. 1 here??? MEEE!!!! Haha..I actually went to the trouble of reading all your comments!! See??
and Amith..what happened to your arm??!!
Hmmm, pity that. I mean... I guess the worst possible thing is to not feel accepted.
Dunno if I can actually feel for such ppl. 'Cos u need tht *bit* to indulge urself.
Nicely done...
Peace. Have a nice weekend.
@ Siya - Thank you so much for the kind words. :)
Oh puhlease!!!!! You just can't come out of the blue and claim tat title just cos u read those comments. ;) :P
Banana Hammocks has us stopped. For now. :D
Cheers
@ Karthik - Yes, that absolutely is the worst feeling ever.
Thanks. :)
No cheers for you. And you know why. :P
nice n sensitive... :) .. rains...!!! :D ...
but what is this sad n teary eyed stuff evrywhr ????!!! i want a happy happy 55 fiction next time..!!!
PS - hv u heard of a thing calld chat ??!! jahan mila tp shuru..!! :P
@ Karan - Well thank you. :)
Happy one?? Will keep it in mind next time. :)
Cheers
Super .. :) ..
(Did i hear .. your wish is my command somewhr ??? :P )
*Racking her brains..trying to think of a witty, sarcy reply*
urgh...urgh..urgh..
Banana hammocks again!!!
Damn! You win!!
Oh, and you two are totally made for each other types. Congratulations!! :P :P :)
*Ducks to escape the mud slinging*
@ Karan - :)
Read, more like. :P
Cheers
@ Siya - YAY !!!!!!!!!
*Does a full five minute victory jig* :D
Siya, sweetie, BAD ATTEMPT to try to make the two of us stop from spamming your comments section. :P
yeah...totally abysmal attempt...ur blog is our playground...buhahahaha( mugambo waala laugh)...
She is. She just needs to wait for the tough time to get over, so she can get outta the tough spot she seems to be in.
Great 55 fiction... you've gotten damn good at it!! Cheers...
I think so too. Great advice. :)
Really ??? Thank you so so soooooo much. *full 28 teeth waali smile*
Cheers
Whozzz that gal ??? ;-)
@ Rahul - Why do you wanna know? :P
writing a 55 word fiction is really tough..good work!..
but somehow going by definition of 55 fiction..I am bit skeptical if this would qualify as a 55 fiction.
Cos there seems to be some conflict but I dont see any resolution.
@ Unknown - Thank you for the appreciation. :)
Well I never really thought of it this way. Guess you are right.
But what the heck!
And well, resolution is hardy ever present in real life either...so...
And hey! Welcome to the blog! Keep visiting and giving insightful comments as these. :)
Cheers
Chalo thee hai..I retire..*sigh*
@Amith: U can play on my blog, but you CAN NOT make fun of my mugambo laugh!!! Bwaaaaaaaaaaah :'(
So I guess, I'll be the one who'll have to tell this story to your grand children ??? ;) :P
Na nana na na, na nana na na. :P
my my!
for a lil girl like you that surely is some emotion :)
hugs!
Lil who?? me??? he he
But *hugs* anyway. :)
sensible....
punch in short delivery.. :P
thanks for allowing me..what is the reason actually..? can i know
@ Mahesh - Thanks. :)
And the pleasure is all mine. :) Nothing ya...just trying to keep it away from prying eyes. :)
Cheers
There's something on my blog for ya that I think you're gonna enjoy... get there, fast!
Cheers... :)
"if only by him"
Beauty...
@ Zlaek - :) / :( (?)!
lovely post...chota packet bada dhamaka :D
hey i just loved ur template...fida ho gaya almost :D...its awesome
cheers
:)
@ The Geekie - He he...thank you so much!! :)
Thank you once again...but ye almost kya hai? Fida hona hai to poora ho na...otherwise the template will feel bad. :P lol
Thanks for dropping by and commenting...keep visiting. :)
Cheers
she would have it. sooner or later. :)
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