SHE REMEMBERS
His warm hands enveloping her cold ones.
The firm grip.
The perfume on his neck.
The broad shoulders,
The strong back.
The soft hair on his hands.
His disarming deep gaze.
The way his hands tucked her hair behind her ear.
And gently caressed her tender lips.
When he tried to manage both the steering wheel and the gears with just one hand
As the other rested on her thigh interlocked with hers.
SHE REMEMBERS
That fateful day.
The confrontation.
The incessant rain of tears.
His indifference.
Her anger.
The sinking feeling.
Her disappointment in him.
In herself.
Regretting knowing him.
All this, as she tries to UN-REMEMBER it all.
OBITUARY
Author: bondgal_rulz / Labels: Depression
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16 comments :
Honoured to be the first one to post a comment on this one... it was very deep, in a surprisingly honest way... got to see a new side of you through this, would love to know what it was all about... someday...
Aww. Been there, done that, many, many times.
Till one day one realizes the true import of this lovely sher by Ghalib,
"Bahut gham hai is duniya mein Ghalib, mohhabat ke siwah"
@arnab....seems like the honour has blinded your thinking...there is no side of me in this poem. :)
@rahul..."been there, done that" ; definitely takes courage to put it in writing here mate. I agree with Ghalib saab, but as they say, better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all.
@isha: ..and I agree. It is just that one shouldn't dwell on it too much. There is a lot more to life. Something a lot of people between 20 and 30 seem to not realize.
Oh! Lou.
It may sound repeating...
but been there and doing that :)
and then I always find myself juggling between two extremes...
one--chod de saari duniya kisi k lie yeh munasib nai aadmi k lie, pyaar se bhi jaruri kai kaam he, pyar sab kuch nai zindagi k lie
second, agar tum mil jao zamana chod denge hum...
and finally one good day (which was a few days back) i concluded that let the love be as it is and the life be lived as it is...
@sutta...it's amazing how those two words can bring about a plethora of emotions in a person. :)
Wow! thats some powerful writing!!
hey nice ..
infact gr8 .. infact brilliant .. :P its really difficult to put these feelings into words and uve done a mindblowing job .. kudos ..!
@ sidharth... thnku. :)
@redemption...sometimes you don't really intend to do a lotta things, guess this was one o em. and thanks a ton. :)
tnx fer ur comment on mine too .. means a lot to the person concerned .. I know I speak for her..
sometimes the things u dnt intend to do and end up doing are the tihngs that count and are appreciated the most. Maybe its because while doing it you wern't under the influence of anything and what comes out would be the real you. Just maybe..
maybe....
keep visitng my blog and posting comments :P
Its so difficult to unremember.
:(
You bet it is !
@ D Sinner....mighty good conclusion it is. :)
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