Kabhi-kabhi shyam hone par suryoday hota hai,
Kabhi-kabhi suraj ki pehli kiran se fiza mein andhera chaa jata hai.
Kabhi-kabhi aasuon mein khushiyan jhalakti hain,
Kabhi-kabhi ek badi si muskurahat ke peeche dher sa gum chupa hota hai.
Kabhi-kabhi mithas mein namak ghula hota hai,
Kabhi-kabhi sagar ka paani bhi meetha lagta hai.
Kabhi-kabhi duriyan nazdeek le aati hain,
Kabhi-kabhi nazdeek rehte hue duriyan bad jaati hain.
Kabhi-kabhi lau baati ko jala kar khud ko mita deti hai,
Kabhi-kabhi shama parwane ko bhi sirf garmahat hi deti hai.
Kabhi-kabhi sab kuch keh kar bhi kuch ankaha reh jaata hai,
Kabhi-kabhi khamosh aankhein sab kuch bayan kar deti hain.
Kabhi-kabhi poori duniya mein hum hi hum ho jaate hain,
Aur kabhi-kabhi hum bhi hum nahi reh paate hain.
kabhi kabhi, ek nagma hi ek ghazal ban jaata hai,
kabhi kabhi, ek khayaal hi ek zindagi ban jaata hai.
9 comments :
since the poem is in hindi i guess the comments should be in hindi too.therefore yeh kavita bahut hi UTKRISHT hai :-)
dhanyavaad sakshi ji :)
kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khaayal aata hai, ki aapke dil mein(of all da ppl!!!) aise khayaalat kaise aa jaate hain??
Except for the mixing of Urdu and straight hindi a few places, it's a great composition. Keep it up.
Oh, I hope you don't mind this addition, I felt it might be interesting to change the traverse composition to parallel, just for one piece,
kabhi kabhi,
ek nagma hi
ek ghazal ban jaata hai,
kabhi kabhi
ek khayaal hi
ek zindagi ban jaata hai.
dun mind it at all :)
yeah my hindi n urdu ARE mixed up...
Hey, you're good! Especially at the Hindi Bit!! :D
thnx arnab....so does that mean no more makin fun of my hindi ? :P :D
That would depend on the situation.. and anyways, you would have much more to make fun of, what with my amazing Hindi skills!! :D
@ Rishabh....whaddaya mean ME of all the people haan ?? I'm not that mean and insensitive a person all right ?
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